Friday, 18 June 2010

Prologue/Chapter one

*I know, I used incorrect grammar in some places..my mind talks to me like that sometimes..
Prologue;


You all know about the little mermaid, Ariel. The youngest daughter of Triton, she blah-blah-blah surface blah prince blah-blah castle voice seawitch blah-blah-blah.

Well, her adventure was great and all, but, mines is not yet as well known. I, Ariel Mist, daughter Bob and Bobette Mist, have traveled the world, searching for..well..you'll see. For it is time, time for my adventure to be known to the world. Prepare yourselves, people!

Chapter One; Ariel's Adventure

It was just another ordinary day in the city. I had gotten home from Potloyeek (Author's note- Potloyeek is courtesy of my imagination, as is this story.) Middle School, (I'm in the 7th grade, 12 years old.) and was researching Australia for a project. (Love the Lamingtons, kiss kiss.) My parents, Bob and Bobette Mist, were not home yet..but old Ms. Qwerty kept an eye on me from her little house down the street. I looked into the mirror next to my closet door and saw my super dark black hair, soft and shiny. My chocolate brown eyes reflected off the mirror, staring back, unblinking. It was starting to creep me out, so I hefted my backpack up on my bed and took out my textbook. I was actually pretty good when it comes to academics, with a perfect 4.0 GPA. Everybody always told me I was 'clever', but I guess brains came naturally to me school wasn't hard. Anyway, I finished my homework quickly and just as fast got bored.

So, not wanting to resort to playing with lint like I did the last time I got bored, (*cough* yesterday *cough*) I hopped on my 22 inch steel rim rubber tire motorcycle (I know nothing about motorcycles, I just compiled all that from movies..lol ;D) and drove off into the sunset with my pony, Speckles. We went past BIG water breathing mouses and eated our way past giant choco-chip waffle legs. Then, the terrible-est thing happened- Speckles sacrificed himself to the sock candy lady. So, I kicked her taco and she gave Speckles back.

BACK IN REALITY:
Motorcycle-my sneakers.
Speckles-My 'stuffed' horsey. (HE'S REAL I TELL YOU!! REAL!! You'll seee..*cackles*)
Sunset- the sun and several fluffy flying bunnies.
big water breathing mouseys- Drooling puppies.
choco-chip waffles legs- choco-chip waffle legs.

The sacrifice Speckles made was me giving him up to my friend Cindy, the sock candy lady, for some warm socks and candy, but then I wanted Speckles back so I kicked over her taco (which was really some beef in disguise..) and she got upset and was afraid I might kick over her other taco so I told her I would stop if she gave me back Speckles.

When we were done with that, Cindy (we were at her house, which I had walked to.) asked me what I was going to do with 'the love of my life'.
"I don't know, Cindy. We've been so much together, but now we barely even see each other. We would, if it weren't for my parents. If only I could drive and had some money! It's a shame they stay at the other side of the town." I told her. Cindy nodded in agreement.

"Well," she said, "you can always have some here." I gave her a huge hug.
"Can..can we have some now?" I asked timidly.
"Of course." Cindy replied, smiling.

"Ahh. That was awesome." I grinned.
"Yep.." Cindy said glumly.
"Hey, why the long face?" I asked.
"WELL, ARIEL, YOU ATE ALL FIVE OF MY CHOCOLATE CHIP WAFFLE PACKS.." she replied, eyes twitching.
"Uhm." I whimpered. Looking in her face, I did the puppy dog face: maximum cute-ness. It worked, as usual.
"Stupid puppies." Cindy muttered. "So, what do you want to do now, Ariel?"
I thought. For a split second.
"Let's go explore the creek.."

End of chapter one. :3
hope y'all liked it XD
-Artic

PS. Alice, I spelled prologue right in the title! That counts for something!! Riight?

7 comments:

  1. Wow...you are a really great writer. By the way, prologue is spelled prologue..lol. xD Ms. Qwerty...it'll be easy typing that. -tries- Oh wait...it's actually not. :/ I'm used to moving my fingers across the keyboard...so I move it all around for nothing. D: qwerty. O.o That was... freaky.
    Love it! Keep it up!
    ~Ali-chan/Alice
    PS. Since my pen name is Alice, my nickname is Ali-chan. xD Just in case you haven't noticed.
    PSS. I have to put my blog address so pplz can get to my website. Otherwise, it'll shown as Ali-chan.wordpress.com. lol.

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  2. Daaaaaang. That was LONG. Compared to my other comment. Oh and by the way, I added you to my blogroll. Can you return the favor? I am in need of more readers! :/
    ~Ali-chan

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  3. Well, likewise, Ali-Chan, likewise. :D
    and okay I'll add you to my blofgroll now..^_^ (that was a typo but it sounds awesomee si I'm keepin' it XD) thanks for adding me to yours!

    -Artic (aka Arielll :])

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  4. By the way, I knew that prologue was spelled prologue..*cough*

    -Artic

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  5. Hmmm....bloff grrooll. :D It does sound awesome! You're welcome. Oh, so it really is you. For my story, I just have five detectives and they take turns narrating each story. In the first story, Drake(he's a he)'s the narrator.
    Suuuuure you did. I absolutely, positively, completely, 100% believe you knew that. *cough* Oh, I must be getting a cold. :P

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  6. Yep..hooray for typods!!
    That's coool, 7 narrators! I couldn't pull off such a thing :P
    *COUGH C-* hey, i never knew cough had a 'UGH' in it! Ughh! *co-ugh* lol. :D

    -Artic

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  7. 7? I thought I said 5?
    At this rate, you'll have a whole bunch of comments that is a conversation. xD
    ~Ali-chan

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